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Tuesday, June 3rd, 2014

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Below you will find several items:

1. a copy of the syllabus & Grade Sheet, which was distributed in class today
2. a copy of the unacceptable errors handout, distributed in class today
3. a copy of the Breaking Bad Viewer's Journal assignment, distributed in class today
4. Packet #1 assignment
5. Packet #2 assignment


English 20—Composition II
Summer 2014
Sacramento State University

June 3-July 10
English 20, Section 1 TWR 10:30-12:50 pm – Calaveras 134

Instructor: Catherine Fraga

Class Blog:  English20Summer2014Fraga.blogspot.com

Office hours:  (Calaveras 149) TWR, 9:30 am-10:20 am
 OR BY APPT.

Course Description (from CSUS Catalog):  Advanced writing that builds upon the critical thinking, reading, and writing processes introduced in ENGL 1A and ENGL 2. Emphasizes rhetorical awareness by exploring reading and writing within diverse academic contexts with a focus on the situational nature of the standards, values, habits, conventions, and products of composition. Students will research and analyze different disciplinary genres, purposes, and audiences with the goals of understanding how to appropriately shape their writing for different readers and demonstrating this understanding through various written products. Note: Writing requirement: a minimum of 5,000 words. Prerequisite: Completion of ENGL 1A and ENGL 2 or equivalent with a C- or better; sophomore standing (must have completed 30 units prior to registration). Units: 3.0.

COURSE GOALS:
Students completing English 20 can accomplish the following:
·      Reading texts from a variety of disciplines in a variety of genres.
·      Identifying appropriate context-based writing conventions.
·      Composing, informally and/or formally, in a variety of subjects.
·      Developing the ability to think critically about the values and standards of writing

Required Texts & Materials:
·      Breaking Bad, Season 1 (there are many ways you can gain access to this television series. It is streaming on Netflix; you can also purchase it on iTunes or Amazon.com. I do NOT recommend that you rely on youtube. Many of the episodes are missing scenes.)
      Rules of Thumb: A Handbook for Writers (9th edition)
by Jay Silverman, Elaine Hughes, Diana Roberts Wienbroer
Publisher:  McGraw-Hill
      Two blue (or green) books (small or large)
      Lined notebook paper with a clean, straight edge.
      Stapler.
      Reliable access to a computer and a printer. You will need the computer to access readings; access the course blog, English20Summer2014Fraga.blogspot.com; and view the seven episodes of Season I of Breaking Bad. In addition, many of the readings will be items found on the Internet and will need to be printed and brought to class.
      Sacramento State Student Writing Handbook, 1st edition—available free on line at:

You may also purchase a hard copy of the handbook for approximately ten dollars at FedEx/Kinkos, on the corner of J Street and 56th (5600 J Street)

(Suggestion: you may want to bookmark the two web addresses above on your personal computer for quicker access.)

Classroom Policies:
1.  Attendance is especially important during this accelerated summer school course, which meets a total of only 18 days.   Classroom discussions prepare students for all writing assignments, and your fellow students and I need your input in order to make this class more complete and enjoyable.  I do not keep track of absences; this is college.

2.   YOU MUST TYPE AND DOUBLE SPACE ALL OUT OF CLASS WORK

3.     In all fairness to other students, out of class essay assignments must be handed in on time.  For every day it is late, 10 points is deducted from your earned grade, even on weekends. You may not earn these points back in a revision.  In-Class Writing Responses, Group Work and Quizzes cannot be made up.

4.     You’re responsible for finding out what you missed if you are absent.  I will provide you with a class roster for your convenience.  If you miss class, ALWAYS ASSUME YOU HAVE MISSED SOMETHING IMPORTANT.

5.      My policy on EXTRA CREDIT is…I do not believe in extra credit. In short, “real” life outside the university does not operate on the extra credit option. You earn the grade you receive. It really is a fairness issue.

6.     ABOUT REVISIONS:  you have the option to revise one of your first two out of class essays. (Due to the time constraints of an accelerated summer course, there will be no time to revise out of class essay 3). If you choose to revise, you must submit the revision with the original.  No exceptions. An essay with unacceptable errors might be an essay you choose to revise. Once you submit your revision, and receive it back with the revised score, you can continue to revise and re-submit as many times as you wish until you earn the grade you desire. ALL REVISIONS MUST BE HIGHLIGTED WHERE YOU HAVE MADE CHANGES AND/OR CORRECTIONS, ADDITIONS, ETC. and THE ORIGINAL GRADED ESSAY MUST BE ATTACHED TO THE REVISION. NO EXCEPTIONS.

7.       Plagiarism:  Students who plagiarize may be expelled from the university. Copying papers off the Internet or using other sources without documenting them are examples of plagiarism. (It is quite easy for instructors to discover whether a student has done this.) Quotes and paraphrases in your essays must be cited. Students who are discovered to have been plagiarizing will be referred to the appropriate University Dean.

From the CSUS Policy Handbook:
“As stipulated in the California Code of Regulations, Section 41301, cheating or plagiarism in connection with an academic program at a campus may warrant expulsion, suspension, probation or a lesser sanction. Administrative action involving academic dishonesty at Sacramento State is the responsibility of the Student Conduct Officer in the Office of the Vice President for Student Affairs. Any administrative action taken by the Student Conduct Officer must be in accordance with the procedures set forth in Executive Order No. 970, Student Conduct Procedures for the California State University.”

Familiarize yourself with this website—everything you need to know about what constitutes plagiarism and the repercussions.

8.  STUDENT ACCOMODATIONS AVAILABLE: Become informed about accommodations for test taking and other learning disabilities on this campus.  The following excerpt is from

Testing Services
Testing for Students with Disabilities
Students registered with Services to Students with Disabilities, (SSWD), are able to take exams in an environment free from distractions, with tools usually not available in the classroom. Some of the testing accommodations available to students are; readers and scribes, computer assisted and computer adaptive software, and wheelchair accessible and adjustable tables. Group room testing times are 12:30 PM on Monday, and 8:30 AM and 12:30 PM Tuesdays - Thursdays. Students arriving after 8:45 AM or 12:45 PM will not be admitted to the testing room. Testing Accommodation Instruction forms are to be completed by faculty and submitted with the exam. Exams should not be faxed or e-mailed.”

9. HOW YOUR GRADE IS EARNED:
Attached to this course outline is your Grade Worksheet. At no time in the semester should you be puzzled about your grade. Please keep ALL returned & graded work until the very end of the semester.

NOTE: quizzes are NOT usually scheduled. Come to class prepared with the assigned reading assignments completed on the day they are due to be read.

Refer to pages 3 and 4 in the Handbook to fully understand how your writing will be evaluated.

10. ABOUT THIS COURSE…
I have designed a very different and I hope interesting and provocative set of themes for discussion and critical thinking/writing for the semester. The core of the course from which these themes/ideas will spring is the first season of the television series, Breaking Bad.

On your own, you will view all seven episodes of Season 1 as well as read a wealth of material connected either directly or indirectly to some of its themes.

This series poses so many intriguing questions about morals, family values/responsibilities, conformity, gun laws, the line between good and evil, gun control, the war on drugs, greed, health care and so much more.

In short, we will examine and expand on several issues connected with the overall term of “breaking bad”—straying from the path of morality, of legality, of conformity towards something deemed unacceptable by the majority of society. In fact, the origin of the term is American Southwest, a slang phrase meaning to challenge conventions, to defy authority, to skirt the edges of the law.

I do not utilize SacCT. This class has a blog and it is vital that you check it on a regular basis, even on weekends, for important information, including reading assignments and other information pertinent to the course. Please bookmark it on your computer for easy, quick access. The blog address is below, AND in two other places on this course outline.
www.English20Spring2014Fraga.blogspot.com

11. A note on classroom etiquette:
If you feel you cannot survive each class session without the use of your cell phone, iPod, iPad or laptop computer, etc., please do not enroll in this class. (Simply, it is the highest degree of rudeness and disrespect.)  If I see you busy texting, etc. I will not hesitate to ask you to leave. (IF THERE IS A COMPELLING REASON THAT YOU MUST KEEP YOUR PHONE ON VIBRATE FOR AN EMERGENCY PHONE CALL THAT MAY OCCUR DURING CLASS HOURS, PLEASE INFORM ME BEFORE CLASS.) Again, we only meet for 18 days. I plan to give you my full attention for the 2 hours and 20 minutes, and I expect the same from all my students.

EXCEPTION:  Many of your reading assignments are found on the Internet. I prefer that you print out these assignments, annotate them, and bring the hard copy to class on the day the assignment is due. However, you MAY access the reading IN CLASS (on an electronic device) if you need to during a quiz or a writing response.

Class Schedule:

(Please note:  This schedule is subject to change at a moment’s notice.  Please bring this schedule and required readings and appropriate handouts to every class session.)

NOT EVERY ACTIVITY IS LISTED ON THIS CLASS SCHEDULE. It is not unusual to have a quick quiz over reading material. There will be no prior announcement for these quizzes.

Tuesday, June 3
·      Introduction to the Course
·      Course Outline (handout)
·      Unacceptable Errors (handout)
·      Breaking Bad Viewer’s Journal assigned (handout)
·      Sign up for Class Contact Roster
·      Lecture: Television vs. Film

Wednesday, June 4
·      Discussion: What is Rhetoric & Why is it so Important?
·      Read Packet #1 (print out ALL reading packets & bring to class)
·      In class WR #1
·      Out of class essay #1 assigned
·      Class Contact Roster distributed (handout)

Thursday, June 5
·      Group Work #1
·      View Episodes 1 & 2 of Breaking Bad (come to class having viewed)
·      Read pgs. 67-78 in the Handbook and read the following in Rules of Thumb:  pages xvii-xviii; page 2; AND familiarize yourself well with all four parts of Rules of Thumb and how to utilize specific information quickly and efficiently.

Tuesday, June 10
·      Out of class essay #1 ROUGH DRAFT due today (OPTIONAL)
·      View episode 3 of Breaking Bad (come to class having viewed)
·      Arrive to class having read pages 34-48 in the Handbook.
·      Read Packet #2
·      In class WR #2

Wednesday, June 11
·      View episodes 4 and 5 of Season 1, Breaking Bad (come to class having viewed)
·       Read Packet #3
·      Group Work #2

Thursday, June 12
·      Out of Class Essay #1 due today
·      Out of Class Essay #2 assigned today
·      In Class Essay #1 (bring blue or green book to class)

Tuesday, June 17
·      Out of Class Essay #2 ROUGH DRAFT due today (OPTIONAL)
·      Group Work #3 in class
·      Review Part 4 of Rules of Thumb.

Wednesday, June 18
·      View episode 6 of Breaking Bad, Season 1 (come to class having viewed)
·      Discussion: How to Critically Read and Evaluate an Essay

Thursday, June 19
·      View episode 7 (final episode) of Breaking Bad, Season 1
·      Out of Class Essay #2 due today
·      Review MLA Documentation guidelines in Rules of Thumb.

Tuesday, June 24
·      In class WR #3
·      Read Packet #4
·      Out of Class Essay #3 assigned today

Wednesday, June 25
·      Workshop/Review on Errors Commonly Found in Student Writing

Thursday, June 26
·      Group Work #4
·      Read Packet #5

Tuesday, July 1
·      Out of class essay #3 ROUGH DRAFT due today (OPTIONAL)
·      Reading Packet #6
·      Arrive in class having read one of the four sections in Part III of the Handbook: Writing Across the Curriculum at Sacramento State. Select the section that “fits” your major field of study. If you have not yet declared a major, select the one that BEST fits what you THINK your major will be. (Your choices are: Natural Sciences and Math; Social Sciences; Arts and Humanities; or Business and Professional Communications.)

Wednesday, July 2
·      Reading Packet #7
·      WR #4 in class

Thursday, July 3
·      Out of Class Essay #3 due today
·      Discussion of WPJ—How to prepare & what to expect

Tuesday, July 8
·      In class essay #2 (WPJ Practice) Bring a blue or green book.

Wednesday, July 9
·      Course evaluation
·      Refer to Part 2 in Rules of Thumb and review writing introductions and conclusions; writing a thesis; and proofreading tips.

Thursday, July 10
·      Last day of class; grade roster check


Name:________________________________________

Summer 2014, Prof. Fraga
POINTS EARNED: Your English 20 Grade Worksheet
1650 points possible

OUT OF CLASS ESSAYS—600 pts.
Essay 1 (200 points)_____     Essay 2 (200 points)_____Essay 3(200 points)

IN-CLASS ESSAYS—400 pts.
In class essay 1 (200 points)_____
In class essay 2 (200 points)_____

IN-CLASS WRITING RESPONSES—200 pts.
WR 1 (50 points)_____
WR 2 (50 points)_____
WR 3 (50 points)_____
WR 4 (50 points)_____

IN-CLASS GROUP WORK (200 pts.)
Each session is worth 50 pts.
Group Work 1 _____     Group Work 2  _____     Group Work 3  _____  Group Work 4 _____


QUIZZES (these five quizzes may not always be “announced” and they cannot be made up. (250 pts. total) Each quiz is worth 50 points. Please record each quiz and your score below.
Quiz 1_____  Quiz 2_____  Quiz 3_____  Quiz 4_____  Quiz 5_____


How to assess your grade earned: Divide the points you earn by 1650 to find the percentage.
100-95=A                                                           
94-90=A-                                                           
89-85=B+                                                           
84-80=B                                                                       
79-75=B-
74-70=C+
69-65=C
64-60=C-
59=D
58 and below=F
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In English 20, students should already be very proficient in word usage.  We do not have time for grammar lessons.  (I will, however, provide short ‘mini’ lessons when I feel they are warranted.)  The following errors that are commonly made on student papers are considered unacceptable.
For out of class essays each unacceptable error takes ten points off your final earned grade. You may correct unacceptable errors and receive the points back if you choose to revise. In class essays that have unacceptable errors CAN always be corrected to earn back the points lost.

1.  there – place                                                Put it over there.
2.  their – possessive pronoun                        That is their car.
3.  they’re – contraction of they are                        They’re going with us.
4.  your – possessive pronoun                        Your dinner is ready.
5.  you’re – contraction of you are                        You’re not ready.
6.  it’s – contraction of it is                        It’s a sunny day.
7.  its – possessive pronoun                        The dog wagged its tail.
8.  a lot – always two words                        I liked it a lot.
9.  to – a preposition or part of an
      infinitive                                                I like to proofread my essays carefully.
10. too – an intensifier, or also                        That is too much.  I will go too.
11. two – a number                                    Give me two folders.
12. In today’s society
or In society today            This phrase is grossly overused and very cliché. Instead use “Today” or “In America” or “Now” etc
13. right(s)/write(s)/rite(s)            rights are a set of beliefs or values in which a person feels entitled: His rights were read to him before he was arrested for stalking Dave Matthews. Writes is a verb indicating action taken with a pen, pencil or computers to convey a message: Michelle writes love letters to Dave Matthews in her sleep. Rites are a series of steps or events which lead an individual from one phase in life to the next, or a series of traditions that should be followed: The initiate began his rite of passage ceremony at the age of thirteen.
14. definitely/defiantly            This error USUALLY occurs when a writer relies solely on spell-check. You really must learn to become the final editor of your work. Definitely is an adverb and it means without a doubt. Mary will definitely miss the Dave Matthews Band concert. Defiantly means to show defiance. She was in a defiant mood. It is an adjective. Or it could be used as an adverb. She was defiantly rude and sullen towards the professor.
15. On your Works Cited page:            you MUST center and type at the top the heading just as it is here: Works Cited. NOT ALL CAPS, NOT BOLDED, NOT UNDERLINED, NOT MISSPELLED, NOT IN A DIFFERENT SIZED FONT, ETC.
16. woman/women            woman is used when you are referring to ONE female lady.
                                                            women is the plural of woman, meaning MORE THAN ONE lady
                                                            There are many women at the nail salon, but only one woman is shopping at the market next door.

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An accumulation of the following errors will affect your grade, but not 10 points off for EACH error.  My evaluation of your work depends on how serious the error is, and how often you make it.  Some do not slow up the reader as much as others.
  • Misuse of the word “you”.  You must actually mean the reader when you use the word “you”.

  • Avoid use of contractions in formal expository writing. (can’t, shouldn’t, didn’t, etc.)

  • Agreement of subject and verb.  Both must be either singular or plural.

  • Fragmented sentences, comma splices and run-ons.  Be sure to proofread your papers carefully before turning them in.

You will not pass English 20 if you cannot write an intelligent sentence in correct English.
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English 20, Summer 2014, C. Fraga

Viewer’s Journal Assignment

Learning Outcome: 
If one is able to write an in-depth character analysis, one will be able to write ANY kind of analysis.

Observing character and determining/analyzing why someone acts, thinks, speaks, reacts, feels, and responds the way one does is both intriguing and also the most challenging of tasks.

For your Out of Class Essay #3, you will be writing a very in-depth analysis of ONE of the main characters from Breaking Bad, Season 1.
You will select one of the following characters: HANK; MARIE; WALTER, SR.; WALTER, JR.; JESSE; or SKYLAR
(This is NOT the official assignment for the essay. You will receive that on the day indicated on the syllabus.)

However, when you do eventually submit Out of Class Essay #3 you will ALSO be submitting a Viewer’s Journal as well. If you do not submit the Journal, 20 points will be deducted from your score on the essay.

What is a Viewer’s Journal?
Simply, as you watch each episode of Breaking Bad, Season 1, you will jot down notes. There are no specific guidelines for WHAT you will write.

Record what you believe is significant or may end up being significant. Some of your entries might read a lot like a recap of the episode. That is fine.

As you view each episode, begin to think about what character you would like to focus on for essay 3. Throughout your viewing, more than one character may intrigue you, so you may be jotting down observations and details about more than one character.

This journal is strictly for YOU and for your use and reference when planning and preparing to write essay 3. I will not be reading through them. There is no requirement for length or content. These notes can be typed or handwritten or be barely readable. Obviously, though, they should be at least readable to YOU. J

When you submit essay 3, you will attach these journal entries to the back of the essay.

It must be clear to me that you have SEVEN distinct entries, one for each episode. Each entry must be titled by the name of the episode.

Example:
Episode 2: “Cat’s in the Bag”

As you view each episode, and observe the main characters, here are some questions to guide your note taking.

• What does this character do (and not do) and why?
• What do others think about your character? And how do you know?
• What motivates your character to do what he/she does?
• What influences this character to do what he/she does?
• What was your first impression of this character and does it change as you view new episodes? Why or why not? In which ways?
• What are this character’s goals, dreams, desires, needs? How do you know?
• Do you like this character? Why or why not?
• Is this character a believable one, a genuine one? Why or why not?

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READING PACKET #1 ASSIGNMENT:


"Sweet land of...Conformity?"
By Claude Fischer
http://www.boston.com/bostonglobe/ideas/articles/2010/06/06/sweet_land_of_conformity/

AND....

"A. J. Jacobs' Year of Living Biblically"
http://www.ted.com/talks/lang/en/a_j_jacobs_year_of_living_biblically.html

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